有哪些初中英语作文常用模板？
一、有哪些初中英语作文常用模板？
这里整理了【中考英语】20篇初中英语优秀常考话题满分作文（可下载）
这20篇中考英语作文范文平时都可以拿出来多读多背，不信你英语作文不拿高分
本篇资料有点多，建议先收藏
资料提供word下载，资料序号【146】
更多学习资料可以搜【初中复习资料】
（资料整理不易，可以收藏-转发支持一下吗）
1、为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
2、亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
【优秀满分范文】
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
3、父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出（不计入总词数）。
提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等：
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情（do something that you can do）,如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
【优秀满分范文】
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
4、请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日；
2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚；
3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友（friends and relatives）;
4.孩子们喜欢春节。
【优秀满分范文】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5、假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发；现在个子高多了，长发。
2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天；现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格：以前外向；现在有些内向。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥；
2.层次清晰，语言流畅；
3.80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
6、背景设定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给Miachael回一封电子邮件。
过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便......
现在
生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及......
要求：1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述；
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面；
3.词数80词左右，开头语以给出（不计入词数）。
参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Michael,
You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
7、随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
优点
1. 足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。
2. 价格通常比较便宜。
3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。
缺点
1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。
2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
2.80词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
【优秀满分范文】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
8、假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数：60-80。
【优秀满分范文】
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.
9、某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题；
2.你对这些问题的看法；
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
10、今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
1. 表述你与母亲间的情感；
2. 为母亲制作一张卡片；
3. 帮助母亲做点事；
4. 陪母亲散步等。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
11、英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷，成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会时谁的。
要求：1.设想当时的情景，适当扩展细节；
2.书写工整，100词左右。
参考词汇：top student优等生；handwriting笔迹；full marks满分
【优秀满分范文】
we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.
Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.
12、现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果，写一篇80词左右的短文。
kind
reason
a few
quiet music
make them feel comfortable
many
musicians who can write their own lyrics
cool
most
music that they can dance to
full of energy
【优秀满分范文】
Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.
A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.
13、假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。
提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物；
2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸（wrapping paper）；
3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。
要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚；
2.80词左右。（信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数）
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Linda,
I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.
Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Guo Jia
14、刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.
First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.
Good luck!
Yours,
Bob
15、假设上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。
要点提示：
1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。
2. 你请他们不要那样做。
3. 他们不听，反而嘲笑你。
4. 你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。
②年轻人是祖国的未来，应该......
参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at
要求：
1. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
2. 要点齐全，行为连贯，可适当发挥。
【优秀满分范文】
Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.
We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.
In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.
16、健康对我们来说非常重要，我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议“健康生活”，从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
1
food
a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat...
2
exercise
do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games...
3
happiness
keep happy, make friends, smile...
【优秀满分范文】
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?
First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.
Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.
Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.
17、健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为主题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。
1. 保持健康的重要性；
2. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；勤洗手；
3. 自己的看法（至少一条）。
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2.内容可适当扩展。3.字数60-80词；4.文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Boys and girls,
It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.
Thank you.
18、近20年来，各方面的调查表明：青少年的体质不断下降。请你以“How to keep healty”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
主要内容包括：
1. 体质下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...
2. 合理的健康建议。如：should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(饮食平衡), enough sleep...
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep healthy
Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.
Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.
Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.
19、节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生，我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活？请以“My low — carbon life”为题写一篇短文，简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。
提示：1.步行或骑自行车上学；
2.节约用水；
3.不用塑料袋；
4.节约用电；
5.充分使用纸张。
参考词汇：on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap
【优秀满分范文】
My low-carbon life
Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?
Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.
It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
20、为配合我市“礼仪宜宾（Charm Yibin）”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well?”为主题的英语作文，请你以一名中学生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。
内容包括：1.守时，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4...
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2.内容可适当扩充。
【优秀满分范文】
How to behave well?
As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.
First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.
Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
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二、初中英语漫画作文开头模板？
As is shown in the picture, a man is fishing in a well happyily, at the same time, a sentence near the picture "fishes cannot live away from water"impresses us strongly. Sure,many people have different opinions about the picture. Some people presume the picture tell us to protect the enviroment around us and don`t pollute water in the well; Still,the other people argue there is nothing special for us to understand.
三、初中作文写作模板
初中作文写作模板
初中时期是培养学生写作能力的关键阶段之一。学会使用恰当的作文模板可以帮助学生更好地组织思路，提高作文的逻辑性和条理性。下面将介绍几个常用的初中作文写作模板，希望对同学们的写作能力有所帮助。
议论文写作模板
议论文是初中作文中常见的类型之一，下面提供一个常用的议论文写作模板：
第一段：引入话题，引发读者兴趣。
中间段落1：列举论点1及支持论点1的理由和例子。
中间段落2：列举论点2及支持论点2的理由和例子。
中间段落3：列举论点3及支持论点3的理由和例子。
结尾段：总结观点，给出自己的建议或观点。
利用这个模板，同学们可以根据具体话题进行修改，增加合适的论点和例子，使整篇文章更有说服力。
记叙文写作模板
记叙文是初中作文中重要的一种类型，它需要让读者通过故事情节来感受作者的思考和情感。下面是一个常用的记叙文写作模板：
第一段：引入故事背景，让读者进入故事情境。
中间段落1：描述故事情节1，包括时间、地点、人物活动等。
中间段落2：描述故事情节2，描写人物的心理活动和感受。
中间段落3：描述故事情节3，展示故事的高潮和转折点。
结尾段：总结故事，表达作者的感悟或思考。
使用这个模板，同学们可以根据自己的故事情节进行修改和调整，让作文更加生动有趣。
说明文写作模板
说明文是用来介绍某个事物、解释某个现象或者阐述某个道理的作文类型。下面是一个常用的说明文写作模板：
第一段：引入说明的主题，简单介绍背景和重要性。
中间段落1：详细介绍事物的特点、原理或现象。
中间段落2：进一步解释或举例说明事物的相关内容。
中间段落3：分析事物的利弊、优点或影响。
结尾段：总结全文，强调事物的重要性或自己的观点。
同学们在写说明文时，可以使用这个模板作为参考，根据具体内容增加细节，使作文更加有说服力和权威性。
议论文 + 记叙文
有时候，作文题目可能要求同学们既要做到议论文的立论明确与论证完整，又要注意情节表示与描写细腻。下面是一个结合了议论文和记叙文元素的写作模板：
第一段：引入话题，引起读者兴趣。
中间段落1：列举论点1及支持论点1的理由和例子。
中间段落2：描述故事情节1，描写人物活动和心理变化。
中间段落3：列举论点2及支持论点2的理由和例子。
中间段落4：描述故事情节2，展示故事的高潮和转折点。
中间段落5：列举论点3及支持论点3的理由和例子。
结尾段：总结观点，给出自己的建议或观点，回顾故事。
以上模板的结合，可以让作文更加丰富多样，既能有力地表达观点，又能以故事情节吸引读者的注意力。
初中时期的作文写作是一个长期的练习过程，希望同学们能够认真学习以上的写作模板，并在实践中不断完善自己的写作技巧。写作不仅能够提高语言表达能力，更能够培养逻辑思维和创造力。
四、英文网站模板改为中文英文网站模板？
不断要改页面中的编码
还要用记事本 打开那个html文件 然后另存为 格式选择UTF-8
希望对你有帮助
五、如何盗用网站模板？
只能仿制，你可以在浏览器中打开他的网站，文件另存下来，然后把他的CSS样式也下下来，进行修改。
其它的办法再没有了。
如果他的模板存放路径和你的一个，你就可以直接下载下来。
六、网站模板的功能？
网站模板是一种预先设计好的网页布局，具有一定的功能和特点，例如响应式设计、易于导航、美观等。
网站模板不仅可以帮助用户快速地搭建自己的网站，还可以提高网站的用户体验，增加网站的流量和曝光率。
此外，网站模板还可以提供一些常用的功能，如搜索栏、社交媒体分享、联系我们等，帮助用户更好地管理和运营自己的网站。总之，网站模板是一个非常实用的工具，可以帮助用户快速搭建网站并提高网站的质量和效果。
七、免费学校网站模板？
可以用cms系统来做，比如pageadmin系统、新云系统、帝国系统都可以做学校网站淘淘资源网有很多学校源码网站模板，可以下载查看www.100bzn.com
八、有哪些初中语文作文常用模板值得分享？
先读这篇作文。
2022广东省中考作文满分作文点评
挑 战
（根据长江出版传媒崇文书局出版的《生命的共感》（编著15818320809，公众号“生命语文共感”也有本文）第102页梁诗敏《突破》改写）
我不由得加快了脚步。
鼓声，从天际倾泻而下，大珠小珠滚落玉盘。我又一次登上舞台，挑战自己。
【亮点：场景描写+开篇点题。场景描写主要写“我”挑战自己，激情演奏架子鼓，先声夺人，暗用古诗“大珠小珠落玉盘”，语言唯美。下文7次提到“挑战”一词，紧扣文题，真正做到了“一路点题一路歌”。】
一年前，我兴致勃勃地报名参加了一个比赛，这个比赛门槛不低，高手如林。老师来到音乐室，关切地问：“这个比赛不简单，你确定要参加吗？”我笑了笑说：“就当是个挑战。”窗外，紫檀树的枝叶在风中轻快地摆动。
然而，结果不尽人意。当天晚上，我早早地进了卧室，紧闭了房门，依偎着月光，独自品尝失败的苦楚:就不应该参加，挑战自己什么的，再也不干了！
次日，我耷拉着脑袋去上课。老师一见我，不提比赛的事，拿出一张谱子：“这首曲子有点难度，我想让你再挑战一下。”
我一听“挑战”，条件反射地摆摆手，忙说：“算了算了……”老师气愤地说：“这是你的选择吗？”
树影凌乱，檐下风铃，摇晃曾经，回忆是一行行无从剪接的风景……我告诉过老师，我选择学架子鼓是因为一部电影《爆裂鼓手》。这部电影的主人公内曼一次次挑战自己，一次次超越，最终实现梦想。我被他的勇敢和坚韧感动。我也想像他一样，一次次挑战，一次次超越。
终于，我从老师手里接下了谱子：“再挑战一次也无妨，我一定会练会的。”老师用力点了点头。我昂着头，快步走进音乐室，疯狂地练起来。
自此，我每天练习两个小时。手指磨出了水泡，鼓棒打断了几根，然而收效甚微。几个路过的师兄师姐小声说：“这么难的曲子，确实不适合她。”“就她也想练我们的曲子了？”“……”
暮雨潇潇，霜风凄紧，残照当楼。少年要放弃挑战吗？我放下了鼓棒，闭上眼。前进就选择了痛苦，后退就选择了安适。进这一步或许有无限风浪，但退这一步也绝无海阔天空。我拾起鼓棒，选择了挑战。【亮点：本段除用景物描写衬托选择挑战的痛苦与豪迈外，还用内心矛盾斗争的描写，揭示选择挑战的深层次的原因，立意就有了深度；用动作描写“放下鼓棒”后“拾起鼓棒”，表现选择挑战的坚决，人物形象就更加丰满。】
苦心人，天不负。
又报名参加了一次高层次的比赛，轮到我出场了。我大步走上舞台。
我的鼓声密集而有颗粒感。快时，万马奔腾，一泻千里；慢时，大江涌动，不慌不忙。强时，如天雷滚滚；弱时，如落花飘零。一声一声，快慢强弱，对比分明，铿锵而有力。我沉醉在鼓声里，心跳与鼓点融合，血液与律动燃烧，燃尽了束缚的藤蔓。【亮点：本段写“我”参加比赛，演奏架子鼓的情景，不是一般化的交代自己获得的名次，而是写出了自己挑战自己忘我投入的高峰生命体验，立意高远。】
师兄师姐一脸惊奇地看着我，老师竖起了大拇指。
勇敢地挑战自己，生命中有无限的可能！
【全文亮点：本文在选材、立意和结构上，均有过人之处。诗敏同学写自己打架子鼓的真实生命经历，表现勇敢挑战自己的积极人生态度，选材新颖，中心突出。采用倒叙的结构，其间插叙学鼓的原因，结构紧凑，经得起推敲。】
中考作文实际上有一个万能模板:困境——努力——突破——再努力——成功。
九、网站模板怎样使用？
模板一般是有配套的建站系统，这个可以联系服务商
十、初中作文投稿网站
初中作文投稿网站是一个为初中生提供作文投稿平台的网站。在这个网站上，初中生可以将自己的作文投稿给编辑团队进行评审。这对于初中生来说是一个很好的机会，他们可以通过这个平台展示自己的作品，学习他人的作品，并得到专业编辑的指导和建议。
初中作文投稿网站的理念是为初中生提供一个提升作文水平、锻炼写作能力的机会。通过投稿和参与这个平台，初中生可以了解到自己作文的不足之处，改进自己的写作技巧。同时，这个网站也为初中生提供了一个交流与合作的平台，他们可以通过评论和互动来与其他投稿者交流，相互学习、共同进步。
初中作文投稿网站的特色是投稿简单便捷。初中生只需在网站上进行注册，填写基本信息，上传作文即可投稿。网站系统会自动为投稿者分类整理，在作文库中展示出来。同时，初中生可以选择匿名投稿，这样可以保护自己的隐私。在投稿后，网站编辑会进行评审，并给出详细的评语和建议。初中生可以根据编辑的建议对自己的作文进行修改，提升作文质量，同时也可以从他人的作文中学到更多写作技巧。
初中作文投稿网站的优势
- 专业编辑团队：初中作文投稿网站拥有一支经验丰富的专业编辑团队，他们对作文写作有着深入的研究和理解。编辑们会对每篇投稿进行细致的阅读和评审，给出专业的建议和指导，帮助初中生提升作文水平。
- 大量优秀作文资源：初中作文投稿网站的作文库汇集了大量优秀的作文作品，涵盖了各个题材和风格。初中生可以通过阅读这些优秀作文，学习他人的写作技巧和经验，拓宽自己的思路和视野。
- 互动交流平台：初中作文投稿网站为初中生提供了一个互动交流的平台。在作文发布后，其他投稿者和读者可以对作文进行评论和点赞，并与作文作者进行交流和讨论。这种互动可以激发初中生的写作激情，增加他们对写作的兴趣。
- 丰富的活动和比赛：初中作文投稿网站经常举办各类作文比赛和活动，给初中生提供展示自己作品的机会。获奖的作品将有机会被发表或获得奖金和奖品。这些活动可以激励初中生写作，提高他们的写作动力。
如何利用初中作文投稿网站提升作文水平
要充分利用初中作文投稿网站提升作文水平，以下几点是需要注意的：
- 投稿并积极参与：积极投稿是提升作文水平的第一步。通过将自己的作文投稿给网站，可以得到编辑的专业指导。同时，通过参与评论和互动，与其他投稿者交流，可以学到更多的写作技巧和经验。
- 阅读优秀作文：在初中作文投稿网站的作文库中，有着大量优秀的作文资源。阅读这些作文有助于提升自己的写作水平和素养。可以注意观察这些作文的结构、语言运用以及表达方式，从中汲取灵感和借鉴。
- 借鉴优秀作文的写作技巧：初中作文投稿网站上的优秀作文一般都有一些共同的特点和优秀之处，可以从中学习并借鉴。注意观察这些作文的开头、结尾、段落结构、修辞手法等，尝试将这些写作技巧运用到自己的作文中。
- 重视编辑的建议：初中作文投稿网站的编辑团队会对投稿作文进行评审，并给出详细的建议和指导。初中生应该认真对待这些建议，并进行修改和改进。通过反复修改，不断完善作文，提升作文质量。
- 参与活动和比赛：初中作文投稿网站经常举办各类活动和比赛，是一种锻炼写作能力和展示自己的机会。初中生可以积极参与这些活动和比赛，通过与其他选手竞争和交流，提高自己的写作水平和自信心。
综上所述，初中作文投稿网站是一个为初中生提供作文投稿平台的网站。通过参与这个平台，初中生可以展示自己的作品，学习他人的作品，并得到专业编辑的指导和建议。利用这个平台，初中生可以提升自己的作文水平，增加写作经验和素材，拓宽思路和视野。初中作文投稿网站为初中生提供了一个交流与合作的平台，他们可以通过评论和互动来与其他投稿者交流，相互学习、共同进步。